Comments on: Preview It https://booksbyedmitchell.com National & Regional Award Winning Thrillers. National Publishers Freedom Award for BEST NEW FICTION in the USA & Canada from a small press. Also an Amazon #1 Best-Selling author. Thu, 01 Sep 2022 00:14:56 +0000 hourly 1 By: Ed Mitchell https://booksbyedmitchell.com/read-chapter-1-here-for-free/book-5-preview-book/#comment-15 Wed, 04 Mar 2020 02:46:59 +0000 https://booksbyedmitchell.com/?page_id=2412#comment-15 In reply to Leora Worthington.

Leora,
Thank you for your keen eyes. It is a huge help for me to hear another person’s point of view on how my words come across.
I agree the Title is neutral. So was Ben-Hur. I’m hoping the reader turns to the back cover and reads the synopsis which leads them to the fact that The Centurion guards the burial tomb of Jesus. But I don’t think the combination is good enough for the reader as is. So I’m going to re-write the synopsis, as well as re-sequence the “tortured” sentence. I’m glad the 1st chapter is doing exactly what I intended. How can a hardened warrior atone for a brutal deed?

]]> By: Leora Worthington https://booksbyedmitchell.com/read-chapter-1-here-for-free/book-5-preview-book/#comment-14 Sat, 29 Feb 2020 17:30:21 +0000 https://booksbyedmitchell.com/?page_id=2412#comment-14 Review of Book 6:The Title is neutral since it does not give anything away about the content. Adds a bit of mystery. The Synopsis creates the setting without giving away the substance. Is this intentional? The phrase ‘while tortured’ causes an immediate impression of while torture is going on and pulls attention away from the concept of the sentence.I like the first chapter and the beginning leads one to wonder what the good deed is in such a setting.

]]> By: Ed Mitchell https://booksbyedmitchell.com/read-chapter-1-here-for-free/book-5-preview-book/#comment-13 Wed, 08 Jan 2020 22:44:39 +0000 https://booksbyedmitchell.com/?page_id=2412#comment-13 In reply to LW.

Bill,
Book-5 ( Black Camel ) will be officially released in March. But, if I get early copies in February I’ll alert you.

]]> By: Ed Mitchell https://booksbyedmitchell.com/read-chapter-1-here-for-free/book-5-preview-book/#comment-4 Wed, 13 Mar 2019 17:44:43 +0000 https://booksbyedmitchell.com/?page_id=2412#comment-4 In reply to LW.

Absolutely, Bill.

]]> By: LW https://booksbyedmitchell.com/read-chapter-1-here-for-free/book-5-preview-book/#comment-3 Sat, 09 Mar 2019 18:54:34 +0000 https://booksbyedmitchell.com/?page_id=2412#comment-3 Let me know when your Book 5 will be available for, purchase, in Print form. Thank you.

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